Haiku your hair

**christine1989** · April 29th, 2011, 09:23 PM

The title says it; write a haiku that describes your hair. (inspired by the "describe your hair in 6 words" thread)

Here's mine:

Fluffy, frizzy blob
Looking better as it grows
Not far from waist now

**jaine** · April 29th, 2011, 09:27 PM

What a nice idea! 5-7-5 syllables, right?

Hair is leaving me
Or trying to, anyway
Inch by inch by inch

**AnnaJamila** · April 29th, 2011, 09:55 PM

Well, I love my hair.
But she's a cheeky bugger!
One day she'll behave . . .

**Miss Catrina** · April 29th, 2011, 10:43 PM

Mousey, thin, fine hair
Torments me every morning
Shiny and soft, though.

**Sooze** · April 29th, 2011, 11:12 PM

Not clever enough (or awake enough) to Haiki me hair yet, but Jaine - that made me giggle! Inspired.....

**Qadupae** · April 30th, 2011, 02:27 AM

Thick and strong and soft
But all of this I would give
Just to be waist length

**Gnomentum** · April 30th, 2011, 03:32 AM

Like trees in winter
Begone, foul dye damaged hem!
My ends branch and split

**MeganE** · April 30th, 2011, 09:47 AM

Nice thread idea.

Here's a reconstruction from what I can remember of the one I thought up while washing honey out of my hair (I forgot the first version);

Longer than it was.
Some days great, others not so much.
Still hoping for more.

Also, I wanted to share this link of possibly the best poetry battle ever imagined.

Anybody else ever seen Haiku wars like this?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ddax0roElTQ

**chenille** · April 30th, 2011, 11:23 AM

Is two haikus OK?

My old stylist quit.
Two years now since my last trim,
Check it: almost waist!

There's one downside though
Must get a trim someday soon
Ten thousand split ends